Post by account_disabled on Feb 18, 2024 4:11:12 GMT -5
That information should be available to me as soon as I land on this page so I can make a decision about whether I want to see a demo. The copy throughout this page is also too long. There are a lot of paragraphs that say the same thing twice and can be tightened up. Try to remember that you want to address customer concerns, not just talk about how great your product is. What the hell are these images? The images don’t have captions and therefore are useless on this page. The primary image at the top of the page looks almost like .
It doesn’t add any VALUE. This page could either have captions under Buy TG Database each image, or use images that are more obvious. I would lean towards just adding a caption to explain what the screenshots are. Someone is BOLD happy The bolding on this page just doesn’t make any sense to me and is WAY overdone. Bolding certain words can add value to a page, but if you’re going to bold 5 or 6 phrases in every paragraph it just loses it’s weight. Instead, choose only 1 thing in every paragraph to bold (and your product name shouldn’t be it).
Where’s the call-to-action at the bottom of the page? Oh right, it’s in the footer. But why? More attention needs to be put on the bottom call to action. Right now it has the same emphasis as the social icons. While we’re talking about social icons, just remove them all together. Are you trying to get a ‘like’ on Facebook with this page? Or are you trying to make conversions and sales? Choose one. 2. Babytel Ad: babytel-ad Landing Page: babytel-lp Click for full-size image PPC ad is clear, but needs a call-to-action This ad is clear about the service that Babytel provides, but adding a call-to-action would make it more powerful.
It doesn’t add any VALUE. This page could either have captions under Buy TG Database each image, or use images that are more obvious. I would lean towards just adding a caption to explain what the screenshots are. Someone is BOLD happy The bolding on this page just doesn’t make any sense to me and is WAY overdone. Bolding certain words can add value to a page, but if you’re going to bold 5 or 6 phrases in every paragraph it just loses it’s weight. Instead, choose only 1 thing in every paragraph to bold (and your product name shouldn’t be it).
Where’s the call-to-action at the bottom of the page? Oh right, it’s in the footer. But why? More attention needs to be put on the bottom call to action. Right now it has the same emphasis as the social icons. While we’re talking about social icons, just remove them all together. Are you trying to get a ‘like’ on Facebook with this page? Or are you trying to make conversions and sales? Choose one. 2. Babytel Ad: babytel-ad Landing Page: babytel-lp Click for full-size image PPC ad is clear, but needs a call-to-action This ad is clear about the service that Babytel provides, but adding a call-to-action would make it more powerful.